Thursday, August 23, 2012

My Sky Comments

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It's midnight, I'm here, under rain, it's dark
It's cold, I hope,
I wish, I want, what?
I desire tomorrow!
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Sina Farajzadeh
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 May 2016

'm shaking but not because of chill, But of fear, yet not of darkness, Fear from bad news, I'll die if I hear that once again by herself. I am not aware of my fate, my destiny, Not sure of tomorrow! .....my sky weeps with me. inner feelings..... sad and pathetic...... you express yourself so powerfully. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Mehri Mehraban 31 August 2013

So lovely, but it's too sad!   I envy you, for your talent, your skill and style in using words. Good luck.

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Nader Baheri 03 September 2012

so sad but lovely.it really shows your inner feeling. i can not even say i am sorry for you.

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