My Sister's Watch Comments

line 7: " lay" or " lays" or " laid" ? [ i think lays ] i'm not sure. dumb verb tenses! ! ! ! It's (for me) certainly a surprise (& stirring) ending. [NOT like stirring cake mix! ] I guess " Watch" does not refer to a timepiece on sis's wrist (as i thought it would) . To MyPoemList bri and..nice leaf :) :) p.s. " Jazib" seems to always want THAT poem read. (see J's comment) .

Beautiful dedication to the sister. Touching and full of warmth. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

Very impressive write, Larry Schreckengost. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Dedicated to my sister Debbie, the heart and soul of our family. All my love

Dear Larry, such a touching and heartwarming write👍👍👍