Monday, April 23, 2012

My Sister And I Comments

Rating: 3.8

Skipping, dancing, all the day,
Laughing, singing, all for play.
Helpful hints along the way,
Seems to have a hint of play.
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Megan Mayes
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 06 August 2014

This is a wonderfully nice sweet and short poem.

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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 06 August 2014

Lovely poem to a sister.

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Francie Lynch 06 August 2014

Trite, at best. Seems to have a hint at play contradicts the first three lines of playing carefree. Go figure.

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Lyn Paul 06 August 2013

A joyful poem expressing all that Life needs to be. Love. Thank You Megan

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Babatunde Aremu 06 August 2013

Love is reciprocal. Nice poem.

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that is all there needs to be!

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Jayne Davies 06 August 2013

A delightful poem! Well done!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 August 2012

a simple but beautiful poem on sisters! I love my sisters, biological as well as social, all over the world. For the content of this poem 10 ++++

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Leslie Philibert 06 August 2012

Good work, like the thoughts behind seemingly simple words

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