My Sister And A Tall Mister Comments

If this is true then its very sad. Unfortuanatly in life we all think we know best and dont want to hear the truth untill its too late. I don't always listen to my brother but I listen to my mother becuase a mother always knows best

I'm not sure if the story is real, but it's really shocking to talk about family violence in a simple way like this. I like your style, telling it like it is, and not having to involve nature, or the sun, or the rainbow to talk about what's going on in your life. Keep writing Tobi, CeCe

tobi, i like when you write about your family. as i reader i would say, dont mind so much about rhymes. they can make a poem really tasty but i dont really think they are a must. just let your life shows in your words - that contains more poetry than most of peoples life :)