Tuesday, December 23, 2008

My Sister Comments

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Growing up we would always fight
thats how we would always end the night.
I know i dont respect you as much as i should
but i guess thats just sisterhood.
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Koti Bri
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Shyam Balaji 23 December 2008

hey koti, nice poem...shows ur love towards ur sis....she must read this..to write a poem about a person is often difficult..GR8 write! ! ...good usage of vocabulary...and u hv given it a natural touch....loved ur poem..keep writing..! ! >.and yeah u'll be a great lil sis to her..and the rhythmic pattern is also too good..ALL THE BEST N GOOD LUCK! ! ! >>. read ma poems and comment on them too...bye.

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Kanass city, MO
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