Fires burn deep
Germs of Satan leaks
All who comes to this tree
Will surely eat
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That was great especially the last line. Even though we might not want to things we are not suppose to whatever it may be sometimes we still enjoy it
So eloquently put. The rhythm moves brilliantly, and the words are effective indeed. 10!
Don't worry about it, you've just eaten too many apples.
ti's good... things that taste real good are usually dangerous and we usually are adviced to stop them... to stop those vices... but it really taste good... real good.. how could we stop? ? we like it.. how could we stop? ? we, then, love it.. how could we stop? ? yeah this one's good.... i think eleven is enough..
Definitly a 10 my friend and I bet Eve thought so too when she was in the garden of eden.
i don't hate it to love my sins because i don't. God has shown us what's good and what's bad, it is your choice to decide if you do it our if you don't. nice..
An interesting read which compells you to look back at your own sins.
He who doesn't sin is not an ordinary mortal. Rest all of us are sinners and that's what qualifies us to be known as humans.
Amazing! Interesting too. Good write and well penned Enjoyed reading it
Very much good! mite i ask what was your inspiration at the time! I'm a early poet who is very much interested in what goes through a real poets mind at the time! and again! ur poem is remarkable
ok, this is nice ha, , i saw my 2 friends here so even if am not invited, i'll write my wrds, , just delet if u find uncomfortable in it ian....and what did maia says? ...'if u r a sin, i want to be a sinner forever''.............waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...my goshhhhhhhhhh, , , okey, ok, ok, , , , me too..i write same wrds ha but little modified..''.if u r a sinner, then i'll make u out of it....''owwwwwwwwwww...hehehhehehe, red lepz donget angryyyyyyyyy, , , i love u my redlepzzzzzzzzzzz.....waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...and u ian, the rabbit...a sinner is not all the time bad...a sinner speaks truths but speaks also lies, , , out of 100 percent, sinner talks 2 o/o truths, , , waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, , , , and this is ony my perpective, not majority ha...hehehehhe, , , , and dont even get angry why i write wrds like this, , , u always leave naughty wrds in ur commnts for me...and sooooooooo? ..this time am ''pasaway''naughty in english, , , so, , , , if symptom persist, , , delet this, , , waaaa, , , bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... and to catrina, hm, , , , sssshhhhhhhhhhh, smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....naughtiness of ur friend is here in love doctors page...so boring todayyyyyyyyy...let's smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.........
amusing write... as my line goes 'if you are a sin, i want to be a sinner forever' nice thoughts here, Eyan something to ponder...to reflect on 10++++ Lovelots, Maia
They say what is wrong is much sweet and juicy...gives you thrill and suspence...much addictive than cocaine....Lolz! nice one anyway........
I just hate my sins but I cant stop this really gets me piss at my myself so much sick feelings towards myself I hate myself because of my sins but I am not perfect... hahaha life goes on
i`d understand 'i love to hate my sins...' although it`d sound strange enough... but 'hate to love...' i`m afraid it doesnt make a sense for me, but in general its a nice poem