Monday, October 5, 2009

.....! My Sins...... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fires burn deep
Germs of Satan leaks
All who comes to this tree
Will surely eat
...
Read full text

Eyan Desir
COMMENTS
Emma Adamyan 18 October 2009

i`d understand 'i love to hate my sins...' although it`d sound strange enough... but 'hate to love...' i`m afraid it doesnt make a sense for me, but in general its a nice poem

0 0 Reply
Nathan Barkley 16 October 2009

That was great especially the last line. Even though we might not want to things we are not suppose to whatever it may be sometimes we still enjoy it

0 0 Reply
V H Ferguson 14 October 2009

So eloquently put. The rhythm moves brilliantly, and the words are effective indeed. 10!

0 0 Reply
Sally Plumb Plumb 14 October 2009

Don't worry about it, you've just eaten too many apples.

0 0 Reply
Joey Valenzuela 13 October 2009

ti's good... things that taste real good are usually dangerous and we usually are adviced to stop them... to stop those vices... but it really taste good... real good.. how could we stop? ? we like it.. how could we stop? ? we, then, love it.. how could we stop? ? yeah this one's good.... i think eleven is enough..

0 0 Reply
John Shea 13 October 2009

Definitly a 10 my friend and I bet Eve thought so too when she was in the garden of eden.

0 0 Reply
♫ ♫ 13 October 2009

i don't hate it to love my sins because i don't. God has shown us what's good and what's bad, it is your choice to decide if you do it our if you don't. nice..

0 0 Reply
John Hulsey 13 October 2009

From one sinner to another, I totally dig this!

0 0 Reply
Elsee Daniel 13 October 2009

really a good one 10+

0 0 Reply
Siddharth Singh 13 October 2009

An interesting read which compells you to look back at your own sins.

0 0 Reply
Siddharth Singh 13 October 2009

He who doesn't sin is not an ordinary mortal. Rest all of us are sinners and that's what qualifies us to be known as humans.

0 0 Reply
Ravi Sathasivam 06 October 2009

Amazing! Interesting too. Good write and well penned Enjoyed reading it

0 0 Reply
Alexander Peralta 06 October 2009

Very much good! mite i ask what was your inspiration at the time! I'm a early poet who is very much interested in what goes through a real poets mind at the time! and again! ur poem is remarkable

0 0 Reply
Lady Grace 05 October 2009

ok, this is nice ha, , i saw my 2 friends here so even if am not invited, i'll write my wrds, , just delet if u find uncomfortable in it ian....and what did maia says? ...'if u r a sin, i want to be a sinner forever''.............waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...my goshhhhhhhhhh, , , okey, ok, ok, , , , me too..i write same wrds ha but little modified..''.if u r a sinner, then i'll make u out of it....''owwwwwwwwwww...hehehhehehe, red lepz donget angryyyyyyyyy, , , i love u my redlepzzzzzzzzzzz.....waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...and u ian, the rabbit...a sinner is not all the time bad...a sinner speaks truths but speaks also lies, , , out of 100 percent, sinner talks 2 o/o truths, , , waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, , , , and this is ony my perpective, not majority ha...hehehehhe, , , , and dont even get angry why i write wrds like this, , , u always leave naughty wrds in ur commnts for me...and sooooooooo? ..this time am ''pasaway''naughty in english, , , so, , , , if symptom persist, , , delet this, , , waaaa, , , bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... and to catrina, hm, , , , sssshhhhhhhhhhh, smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....naughtiness of ur friend is here in love doctors page...so boring todayyyyyyyyy...let's smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.........

0 0 Reply
Miriam Maia Padua 05 October 2009

amusing write... as my line goes 'if you are a sin, i want to be a sinner forever' nice thoughts here, Eyan something to ponder...to reflect on 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

0 0 Reply
Catrina Heart 05 October 2009

They say what is wrong is much sweet and juicy...gives you thrill and suspence...much addictive than cocaine....Lolz! nice one anyway........

0 0 Reply
Eyan Desir 05 October 2009

I just hate my sins but I cant stop this really gets me piss at my myself so much sick feelings towards myself I hate myself because of my sins but I am not perfect... hahaha life goes on

0 0 Reply
Eyan Desir

Eyan Desir

caribbean
Close
Error Success