My Simple Life Comments
I live my life in a very simple way
Before breaking of dawn I start my day
I wake up to the sound of the wall clock
Sit in the bed and for a while to Him silently pray
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A simple life, enjoying the simple things of life gives greater satisfaction than a life that is hectic, wallowing in the artificial luxuries of the world. Starting the day with the dawn with a prayer to God will make the whole day auspicious! Beautifully put!
Ah what lovely things may happen when you rise with the nature! And this lovely piece so well-crafted provides the proof. Philosophical at the end as is the Poet's wont.
You are so kind sir giving such a sweet comment. Feeling flattered. My regards.
The essence of poetrt is when diverse meanings can be retrieved from it. Ideas different from the writer's mindset. Tgis is just awesome
You are 100% right. This is what i try to do when i write. Regards.
A beautiful poem on life imbued with the beauty of nature. Life is wonderful when we are surrounded with nature and we feel its beauty and wonders. Beautifully crafted. The recurring lines add beauty to this write.
Honored. Thanks for such a wonderful review of my poem. My heartfelt gratitude.
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8/2/2025 9:01:12 AM # 1.0.0
Simple life.. peaceful life. A meaningful composition...top score!