My Silver Bell Comments

You had me fooled right up to the end. Very good poem and excellent camouflage of the main theme of the poem Good Job.

O such a sweet! ! ! poem. What an imagination you have Almedia. So enjoyed this poem; D

really a sweet write with meaningful way..idea is rich and impressive

yes, i'll never have another chocolate kiss - why lure me when i'm at a disadvantage a great write indeed

You wanna me me hungry? anyway good write

Yummy Yummy Smoothie Smoothie Symbolizing teeny bonnie ‘her milk -chocolate –body’ Enjoy slowly be not nervy ... ~ niv Thanks Ma’am for such a nice poem…wonderful metaphor…licked and lapped like savor… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK