Saturday, November 8, 2008

My Silent Teacher* Comments

Rating: 5.0

I again try to write for him
To tell him how I feel
And again my thoughts just fall off the page
None of the poetic leaves of my tree
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Sebastine Humaemo 17 December 2008

beautiful lines.....well penned...........regards sebastine...

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Heather Hill 22 November 2008

Very emotional...you poured your emotions very well into this poem and its very good...love it....

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 November 2008

Seemingly, you've had a crunch on your Teach but hey what the heck.....its happened all the time vice versa! ! Nice writes Crystal.

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Stacey Watts 10 November 2008

Very brilliantly written. A truly beautiful poem written with true heartfelt emotion. Great job 10.

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Mrs. Cynosure

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