My Silent Sigh (For You) Comments

Maya, r u really 16? im sorry for asking, but i need to be sure. although i`v known abt wisdom, thats its not abt age. well, my dear, i must admit ur experienced and wise woman, sorry if it not suitable with what u feel abt urself, but i hardly can call u a girl. i feel myself a lil girl near u... but the poem............. it can take far away, its powerful, its painful, its hopeful... much like the point of an old song u may havn`t heard 'I`ll survive', but for sure u heard i can an equivalent of it by Pussy Cat Dalls 'Hush hush'... u`ve expressed every easy and deep pain of a dissapointed woman. i can say amazing! i havn`t underlined some of lines in my coment as we sometime do, in order to show how precious all the words in poem for me. u`ve got a golden brain and a sensitive soul. Plz, all is left for u to do is being selective with ur partners, be happy always, and bravo for ur work!