My Silent Love Comments

Congratulations............

Superb piece......wonderful to read.....

Congratulations, dear poet Ayan on selection of this poem as Member POD for the day. Well deserved.

use of words are terrific

YOU YOUNG POET HAVE Certainly come a long way now about love you also say 'tis normal at ur age we have all passed the same stage @ur now age

beautifully written, true poet

Silent watcher without watch, Active as nothing but completing my mind, My world is filled with your fragrance. In my heart and soul you are my tacit charm, Beauty within beauty.

The deep and turbulent ocean of life, The Wind of thought has no direction, Chaotic is the way of life, Mind hovering around desolation, A deep dungeon of painful heart, Only you are calm and quiet,

calm and quiet, Sleeping or reposing in my Being, Like dark night or Sunless day, Like swan in placid lagoon, Like moon in waveless stream, You are a calm witness, Silent watcher without watch, Active as nothing but completing my mind, My world is filled with your fragrance. In my heart and soul you are my tacit charm, Beauty within beauty.

The deep and turbulent ocean of life, The Wind of thought has no direction, Chaotic is the way of life, Mind hovering around desolation, A deep dungeon of painful heart, Only you are calm and quiet, Sleeping or reposing in my Being, Like dark night or Sunless day, Like swan in placid lagoon,

Silent watcher without watch? I don't quite understand that expression, but the poem is intriguing nevertheless.

Witness the Beauty within Beauty..May God Bless you🌷

Beautiful poem dear poet....100000000000 vote from me

Silent watcher without watch, Active as nothing but completing my mind, My world is filled with your fragrance. In my heart and soul you are my tacit charm, Beauty within beauty.....

Silent watcher without watch, Active as nothing but completing my mind, My world is filled with your fragrance. In my heart and soul you are my tacit charm, Beauty within beauty.

Like dark night or Sunless day, Like swan in placid lagoon, Like moon in waveless stream, You are a calm witness,

Sleeping or reposing in my Being, Like dark night or Sunless day, Like swan in placid lagoon,

Mind hovering around desolation, A deep dungeon of painful heart, Only you are calm and quiet,

The deep and turbulent ocean of life, The Wind of thought has no direction, Chaotic is the way of life,