Friday, December 2, 2005

My Silent Listener Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look back at the distant past,
With a lump in my throat and a hole in my heart,
Those sweet memories of joy and pleasure,
Those days forever I must treasure.
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shreya koppaka
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Mystic Indian 11 August 2009

we are all silent listeners - the speaker and the listener as well.. well crafted piece.10/10 Please visit and review my work too. Thank you.

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Ted M 13 July 2009

Interesting piece, lovely flow, nicely crafted very cool.

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Uday Sagar 10 January 2008

thats ur self..................

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Vidushi Khera 13 December 2005

This poem i could really relate to, specially since you've worded a very true feeling! ! I could hear myself say those very words...target acheived! ! It's a great poem with a beautiful flow and pleasing rhyme. Keep up the good work! ! LuV VidZ

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Ray Lucero 02 December 2005

Sheya, Nice continuity and honesty. You have the courage to ask so how can God refuse your plea? Ray

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