Friday, March 4, 2016

My Silent Dwelling! Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a place I go each day
A place where peace resides
I go there to re asses myself
Time ceases when I enter my silent domain
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Rob Lamberton 15 September 2023

I think of the verse, "Be still and know that I am God"

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Chinedu Dike 17 August 2022

Deep and exquisitely penned is this poem of yours. A high relatable experience... an insightful rendition of words.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 April 2022

Truly a brilliant poem about solitude.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 January 2022

In my solitude I found myself This is the place where I sit back And rejoice life's elixi....great! A magnificent poem. Top score! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 January 2022

And I sit quietly pondering on life Confronting all my fears and pain Making peace with all the disappointments Erasing all the bitterness from my heart And accumulating all the little joys In my solitude I found myself.....quest for tranquility and peace! Admirations! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2021

And greatly admire your poem that psynchonises with the process of her thinking...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2021

Sylvie says, silence is the entrance! I support her

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 November 2020

Time ceases when I enter my silent domain My conscience just taps my heart's door/// the silent dwelling heart can seek the peace in the self kingdom where the conscience lives alone with wisdom to seek the true self// superb poem penned

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 June 2018

There is a place I go each day/A place where peace resides/I go there to re myself/Time ceases when I enter my silent domain/My conscience just taps my heart's door……I profusely admire the gravity of expression and magnanimity of the pious poetic soul! It’s a beautiful poem! (10)

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 October 2016

Dear Aarzoo, Revisited this beautiful poem, after many months. Loved reading it once again. Yes, everybody needs his/her own space- a few solitary moments, in communion with Him. And in His Treasury there an immense treasure of unending time. So, there peace resides. And time ceases. And, there we able to accumulate all the little joys. In my solitude I found myself This is the place where I sit back And rejoice life's elixir This is the place where I interact with God And drink the cup of peace from God's own hand. This is where, I find profound poetry. Congrats Aarzoo for this exquisite work.10

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M Asim Nehal 08 July 2016

And how did I missed this poem and such a place where I can be with the self in peace. A philosophical poem beyond rating.....Loved it Aarzoo

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 April 2016

Time ceases when I enter my silent domain My conscience just taps my heart's door And I sit quietly pondering on life Confronting all my fears and pain Making peace with all the disappointments............. in my solitude i found myself........... beautiful my dear poetess. silence, prayer, union with God and a self examination...... that should be life actually. you possess it dear poetess. tony

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Here I find the total surrender to the god for a peaceful life and good poem.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 18 March 2016

Fantastic, transit of tranquil peace, inner demand of each soul, like to vote 10, it's magic of words

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Abhilasha Bhatt 10 March 2016

Erasing all the bitterness from my heart And accumulating all the little joys....... If we apply these lines on our life... we can get rid of every confusion and disappointment........thank you for this sharing :)

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Nosheen Irfan 07 March 2016

This poem is so soothing for the nerves. That's what we all need..silence n peace. Time for contemplation amidst the mad rush of this life. This poem inspires me to write one like this. A definite 10.

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Souren Mondal 05 March 2016

Sometimes, amidst the hurly-burly of everyday life what we need is a few moments of silence and peace, without it we will cease to be.. I often just sit in a canvas chair, play some soft music, ghazals or classical, sip on a cup of coffee, and look at the sky with or without stars.. It makes me feel good.. The world have become so full of noise now.. Everywhere people are yelling and screaming.. A little silence is so needed.. I can relate so much with this poem Arzoo.. This one is one of the finest poems of yours I have read., Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 March 2016

Making peace with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 05 March 2016

A poet's corner? ? ? ? is this the secret of your most beautiful writes. A beautiful inspiring place that has made you our favourite poet. Loved your poem. thanks for sharing.10

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Akhtar Jawad 04 March 2016

An amazing thought, solitude results in concentration of thinking, we understand that in solitude what we cannot understand in a crowd. A lovely poem by Aarzoo Mehek.

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