Saturday, August 9, 2014

My Silence My Hymn Comments

Rating: 4.8

Silence is knocking at my heart
My brain is trying to keep me apart.
Friends' faces have faded
And they have gone much ahead
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Ruma Chaudhuri
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Khalida Bano Ali 21 August 2014

Face of a true friend is never faded, friendship is immortal.

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In life there is no going ahead or staying. Ewing...but I do get your gist...paths that once we thought were ment forever diverge and we loose touch....are these tears of sadness or shear remembrance. Lovely work.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 August 2014

Before erasing the faces of your friends you should ask them whether they have ignored you or you ignored them. An impressive poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 August 2014

'Friends' faces have faded And they have gone much ahead' - By this, did you mean your friends have died, or they have departed from you to a distant place? What did you mean by the word - 'pacificness'?

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Ruma Chaudhuri

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