Tuesday, September 8, 2020

My Shoulder Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Tis the beginning; 'tis the end
I am a child; a pauper
But the whole world is on my shoulder
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Hannatu Pqrs
COMMENTS
Lyn Paul 28 September 2020

Excellent writing. I could sit and read your work all day but time takes me away. Thank You Hannatu

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

ha ha. Thank you for that encouragement!

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Zehra Bukhari 12 September 2020

Very deep and interesting. I really like the way you explained the main idea and the purpose of this poem. ~Zehra~ A young poet

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 September 2020

Well expressed, sad and captivating.10+

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Thank you for that validation!

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