Wednesday, February 25, 2009

My Short Verse #2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

on the job
my position they rob

bring them flowers
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louis rams
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lovely satire in each verse

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Vaibhav Pandey 25 February 2009

nice write.......good satire.....

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Sandra Fowler 25 February 2009

Excellent satire. I love your ironic last lines.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra

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