Monday, November 2, 2020

My Shoes, Our House Comments

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You cannot complete me
For I complete myself
Like a pair of feet
these shoes alone keep me whole
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Kevin Patrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 April 2023

A beautiful thought so true. Very enlightening and well expressed poem.

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Anjandev Roy 21 April 2023

This is simply brilliant piece.....thanks for sharing....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2020

Wonderful! The last stanza provides a precious message! Appreciated.

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