Alas, my love, what heart felt phrase
Could my sad verse express;
That might well serve to satisfy
This pain I now possess?
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A legendery job is done! Wonderful poem with beautiful idea.
yes, it's time to set your sail today, not tomorrow, or next time, but today, . Your words are full of deep emotions, the cobwebs of hurting experience and the lasting expectations to not let that ship go away..There is still that turning back, as i can feel it..but go, my friend.sail away..your inner peace will go with youy. Shalom Hugs, Meggie
Very emotional parting and as the tide comes in it goes out and washes everything away.Good rhyme another 10 with many stars if I could vote.
May your voyage be a smooth one this time around bro.Take care.
I enjoyed this immensely. Very poignant and rhythmic. You write some great poetry. Mark
hmmmmmm............. a little time and little love.........spinkle of love and a pinch of u...could bring back the friendship again............well penned
A farewell letter that could be set to a haunting tune, A lovely poem that is certain to become a classic. Kind regards Ann
Excellent poem with a well penned theme. I enjoyed this. Jim
this is a lot of exlent work as is the other i enjoyed every word yu are bye far a master of the art you need no perfetion you are born with the talent of poetry
Beautiful and so poignant...enjoyed the read...thank you..10++
You know at times I am very envious of you. I feel I am reading Kipling or Browning, even Frost. You do have a superb way of writing and the topics I thoroughly enjoy.