Saturday, February 7, 2009

My Ship Set Sail This Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alas, my love, what heart felt phrase
Could my sad verse express;
That might well serve to satisfy
This pain I now possess?
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Cristy Upshaw 08 June 2009

You know at times I am very envious of you. I feel I am reading Kipling or Browning, even Frost. You do have a superb way of writing and the topics I thoroughly enjoy.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

A legendery job is done! Wonderful poem with beautiful idea.

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Meggie Gultiano 20 February 2009

yes, it's time to set your sail today, not tomorrow, or next time, but today, . Your words are full of deep emotions, the cobwebs of hurting experience and the lasting expectations to not let that ship go away..There is still that turning back, as i can feel it..but go, my friend.sail away..your inner peace will go with youy. Shalom Hugs, Meggie

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Very emotional parting and as the tide comes in it goes out and washes everything away.Good rhyme another 10 with many stars if I could vote.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 February 2009

May your voyage be a smooth one this time around bro.Take care.

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Mark R Slaughter 08 February 2009

I enjoyed this immensely. Very poignant and rhythmic. You write some great poetry. Mark

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Reshma Ramesh 07 February 2009

hmmmmmm............. a little time and little love.........spinkle of love and a pinch of u...could bring back the friendship again............well penned

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Ann Beard 07 February 2009

A farewell letter that could be set to a haunting tune, A lovely poem that is certain to become a classic. Kind regards Ann

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Jim Norausky 07 February 2009

Excellent poem with a well penned theme. I enjoyed this. Jim

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Aubrey silver 07 February 2009

this is a lot of exlent work as is the other i enjoyed every word yu are bye far a master of the art you need no perfetion you are born with the talent of poetry

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Fiona Davidson 07 February 2009

Beautiful and so poignant...enjoyed the read...thank you..10++

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