Thursday, May 28, 2009

My Shining Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sky is full of stars
Some stars, look small
Some stars, look big
Some are shining bright
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

this is a wonderful, poem sir..I enjoyed it to the fullest extent..very musical, nice beautiful orchestra... it is A+++ from me..

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Surya . 31 May 2009

a wonderfull poem. you are indeed a shining star.posted 10 surya

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 May 2009

A poem shining like a star...................A Good rhymes as always.............

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Louis Rams 28 May 2009

it takes up a big part, once it shines in your heart. KEEP THAT STAR SHINING

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Eyan Desir 28 May 2009

Nice work Sweet rhymes

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Joseph Poewhit 28 May 2009

Hitch your wagon to a star, so they say

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Catrina Heart 28 May 2009

Our shinning star is always in our heart. Wonderful poem woven with fine end rhymes.........10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

Nostalgic aroma is here within this beautiful poem. The twinkle stars of the sky have their effect on us still. 10++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 May 2009

Like diamonds, stars are forever and so is your shining star. Beautiful write, Kranthi. Best Wishes Naseer

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i was about to be the first to comment and say the same. i love the meaning, enjoy the rhymes

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Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

good word play there to support your shining star...impressive write

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