I was but a little lost sheep,
who laid down by the river to sleep.
My Shepherd walked across the water,
to rescue me for keeps.
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Just read your beautiful poem. It makes one feel like bowing down to God 'in humble adoration'. Loved it. If you find time, you may like to read my poem- 'My Friend' and may be, some more too!
Your hand is good at. I believe that It's excellent poem. Go ahead. Be well always.