Wednesday, November 13, 2013

My Shelter From The Storm Comments

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I've built a storm shelter deep in my mind
For when I feel I must take flight;
I get there quickly, my provisions are few -
Some music, pen and paper to write
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Lora Colon
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Bipasha D 18 December 2018

Such a shelter is required in life, it keeps us sane even when situations are unfavorable. As always a wonderful poem with rhyme and rhythm.

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Lora Colon 18 December 2018

Thank you for your insightful comment.

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David Lessard 04 December 2013

It's nice to retire to a shelter when things get overwhelming. Nice write.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 14 November 2013

amid the turbulence outside, we find a peaceful haven inside to retire and hide. at least we can escape for sometime. great poem, Lora.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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