Thursday, April 30, 2009

My Shattered Soul Comments

Rating: ★3.5

My twisted broken soul lies in venomous
pieces strewn across the dark floor.
It lays here for you to take and to with
what you please, but no
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clayton young
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Ted Sheridan 06 May 2009

It is all about the pain....not so much feeling it...everybody does that...but in describing it...as other than a heartache.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 30 April 2009

You write similarly with W.H Auden..amazing! great imaginations u got..well done

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Round Rock Texas
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