Friday, November 11, 2016

My Shadows Comments

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Oh God, save me, from the things I'm so afraid of.
The type of darkness the night can be made of.
So Afraid when I can't see, When I can't Breath,
and the Feelings won't Leave...Save Me.. Lord I
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Rebecca Navarre
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Jeri Martindale 24 November 2016

Another great one! I'm about to go through all ur poems now! Love the meaning, the tone, the way my emotions went up and down on the roller coaster of your feelings. Knowing GOD will fix it all!

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Rebecca Navarre 25 November 2016

Thank You! Jeri, For Your Kind Comments! I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Wonderful! ! ! Writings As Well! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2016

Sweet water flows from stream and gives taste of nectar and joy. But darkness gives fear. Sometimes we see own shadows and get fear. But having memory of God solves our problems. This is very interesting poem really.10

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Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2016

Thank You! Ever So Kindly Kumarmani, For Your Beautiful Reply! I So Look Forward To Reading Your Wonderful Writing! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

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