My Shadow Whispers Comments

Pushpa, what does 'so much petrified I'm for' mean? There's something missing in that construct. Again 'to authenticate it's superiority higher than I've.' Doesn't make sense. And finally in the next to last line of the poem you said, 'both of us can't sense each other in the depth of darkness.' You need to say Neither of us can sense...' or say, 'Both of us can sense.' Using precise English is just one tool that a poet must have to project ideas. Raynette