Friday, January 17, 2014

My Shadow On A Mission Comments

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The shadow of mine is growing tall
And he is on sole mission
That he must tread
In front of me ever and everywhere
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 January 2014

He doesn't know about the unlaid tracks ahead Shadow does not think of the future. How fortunate it is! Thank you for a nice poem.

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Rubab Atwal 18 January 2014

A very touching and beautiful poem, enjoyed it

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 January 2014

Very touching and insightful................me, shadow and light inseparable......one departs all vanish............Dinesh Ji well done...............

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Valsa George 17 January 2014

Light and shad(e) ow are inseparable entities! But a shadow has only a shadowy existence as it can survive with the light alone. When the light fades out, the shadow dies! ! Great write, Dinesh.

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Kavya . 17 January 2014

Shadow....our only constant companion, who stays with us through thick and thin........the last para is highly captivating One day his destinations will end for want of pathmakers. Then he will stay with me I am sure. My shadow triumphs in his spring of youth He doesn`t know about the unlaid tracks ahead.

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