Thursday, May 9, 2013

My Shadow Leaves Me Alone Comments

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When I need light
The wind blows the lamp out

Every one leaves me
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Abdul Wahab
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Sallam Yassin 10 May 2013

Alas you couched the loneliness and it's every touchy OOOOOOOOh! ! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 May 2013

I will give u a clue never expect any thing u will never be demoralised / In this period we have be resilient /nice poem

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Shahzia Batool 10 May 2013

i read somewhere: Expect the unexpected...and expect nothing even from your shadow...the plight in the poem is not because of shadow's leaving you....but your reliance on it....the poem is giving a feeling...! ! ! ! !

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David Wood 10 May 2013

A lovely but sda poem. Remember a friend in need is a friiend indeed. True friends are hard to come by.

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awonderful piece. the begening is superb.

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 May 2013

The like-mindedness of people in the present world scenario are based on conditions.Thats the reason the shadow leaves you alone.Sometimes people do get a soulmate though not always in life.A very inquisitive write Sir, first of its form.

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Dave Walker 09 May 2013

A fantastic poem, really like it, a great write.

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