My Shadow (Children) Comments

Lovely and very funny and true....

Lovely and very funny and true....

Another great poem, C.J. Reading your work makes me smile - the innocence conveyed through your words - makes me feel like a child again. Thank you for that. Shannon

CJ, This is a perfectly lovely children's poem. I would have loved it when I was a child and the child in me still responds with joy to its rhythm, rhyme & the playfulness with which the idea/description is written. (10 from my inner child, smiling with remembrance!) Hugh

These children poems have a comfort to them, perhaps we are all still children!

My shadow has got four legs. Wonderful, as always CJ Love Denis Joe

CJ...very good. I liked the idea of having the shadow 'hooked' on. As I read more and more of these wonderful poems for children, I realize that I'm attracted as much to the voice in the poems as to the content and words, which are always clever and surprising.

this is really a very different way to express shadows...liked it... regards, ASHKA

I like this, it reminds me of my daughter!