Monday, October 17, 2016

My Shadow.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

A footstep was heard at the door and
I turned back, was amazed, quite surprisingly.
All I see is My Shadow...
Wanted to let it go, Wanted to shut the door.
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Randhir kaur
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Siddartha Montik 30 March 2017

a Philosophic Peace! ! very nice! .. All I see is My Shadow... Wanted to let it go, Wanted to shut the door. Verse with Deep meaning as if the mind of Meditative state where we let Go things of us and free ourselves from Many! ! thank you for sharing Poet! ! 10++!

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Valsa George 03 December 2016

While young we are frightened of many things.....! With age we learn to conquer all irrational fears! Finely put Randhir!

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 November 2016

Alas! ! What the days were before! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Randhir Kaur 29 October 2016

Thank you so much Mr.Mantu for the kind appreciation. Dear stay connected. Keep reading. Keep writing.

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Mantu Mahakul 29 October 2016

Hearing footsteps give amazing effect in mind. Seeing own shadow sometimes we get confusion but this is reality. Thinking deep of past opens back memory of shadow. Living life in glee is interesting and amazing. Nicely penned poem! , ...10

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Randhir Kaur 29 October 2016

Thank you Khalid Sir. Smiles and deep respect.: -)

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 25 October 2016

A beautiful poem presented beautifully Randhir.Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Randhir Kaur 25 October 2016

Thank you Kishore Sir and Mehta Sir for the kind review.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2016

nice one... with slight show....10 With slight show Let there be dark The shadow shall not start With advancement of light It will appear again with slight show

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Kishore Kumar Das 23 October 2016

Your poem emphasizes the importance of self-introspection in our daily work which can help us in taking correct decisions in future......thanks for sharing your beautiful thought....

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Randhir Kaur 23 October 2016

Much thank you reverend Sir. Keep reading.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2016

A beautiful poem having deepest feeling has been shared nicely.Let me quote a line I like most....My inner soul wanted to tell me about the situations...10

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