Tuesday, January 26, 2016

My Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

The one who remained out of my sight,
the one I dreamed in a sleepless night,
melting my heart in the liquid moonlight,
looked not found, in a pleasant sun light,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Nosheen Irfan 28 January 2016

Great read. Yes, darkness brings to light many things that are hidden from our eyes. You have presented a truth in a beautiful, sublime manner.10

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Valsa George 26 January 2016

Sometimes what is hidden in the light of day gets unveiled in the darkness of the night. In moon light, she sailed to you as a dream, as an engrossing passion and as a thrilling presence! Very romantic poem with great rhyming!

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Kelly Kurt 26 January 2016

Night and day both have their unique qualities. The lighted hours illuminate harsh realities and the softness of night romances the mind and highlights the heart.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 26 January 2016

Tremendous.....really a marvelous sharing you have done.....amazingly narrated....thank you for sharing :)

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 January 2016

A poem full of poetic beauty and imagery. It is in darkness that one sees the true beauty of a friend. Akhtar Sir! A full 10 for the poem! Enjoyed reading it.

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