Thursday, October 6, 2011

My Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

A Dark figure Descending from my feet,
A shadow clawing at the black of the street,
Crawling as I walk, together as one,
Listen to my tale, Watch shadows come undone.
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Crimson Love
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Jacqui Broad 07 October 2011

Very deep, dark even. Yin and Yang. Darkness vs. Light. Good vs. Evil. Ego vs. Alter-ego. Good poetic writing style. Makes one think...

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Shadow Girl 07 October 2011

I like this..good title LOL! ! ! xoxo...nice writing..loved the idea. -SG x

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Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 07 October 2011

Talk about one's dark half.... Good one :)

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