Saturday, January 17, 2015

My Sexy Pen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Being invited to a workshop,
By a dear friend, NO refuse,
Me arriving, seeing wood chop,
Finished color, just to choose.
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Zoila T. Flores
COMMENTS
Rajnish Manga 10 July 2017

This goes according to the pop culture. Try something new which could catch the fancy of people around without bothering about its long term appeal or value. Thanks.

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Michael Walker 24 May 2016

This works very effectively to a surprise ending 'my sexy pen'. Very good stanza shaping. M. Walker.

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Michael Walker 10 October 2015

I loved this poem. The rhyming quatrains are very neat. The ideas are brilliant. M. Walker.

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Lyn Paul 17 January 2015

Loved it Zoila as I have bought these from shopping centres for gifts. Have never made. Then to see this newspaper article, I was very impressed. Excellent article. Great picture too! !

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