Thursday, July 2, 2015

My Selfie Comments

Rating: 4.8

My Selfie

I write my selfie in quite truthful words
I think taking it only with a cam is absurd
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Yasmin Khan
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Yasmin 13 August 2018

Kind thanks M. Nehal Asim After a long time I return to PH. Your words are encouraging.

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M Asim Nehal 12 October 2015

The depth of selfie in your poem is evident from each verses...........I liked whole stanza: Nature and poetry enchant and fascinate me.............10

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David Wood 17 August 2015

Hi Yasmeen, long time no see, after two years I've started writing again. I love your poem, a selfie in words is much better than a photo

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Yasmin 13 August 2018

Thanks David Wood, I feel sorry for being away from PH for a long time.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2015

After a long time a poem by a great poetess having amazing style, inspiring thoughts and enchanting description with a picture that not only further describes her thought but adds beauty to this beautiful poetry. From my side it's poem of the day.............................10

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Yasmin 13 August 2018

Aw! You made my day by making such nice comments.

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Valsa George 07 July 2015

Enjoyed this selfie of yours costructed in words! I wonder if this is my own selfie! Yasmeen, in many things I feel we are alike! Looking into a person's inside is quite interesting! You have done a great job!

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Yasmin 13 August 2018

All poets are almost alike. I feel happy that you liked it.

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Shahzia Batool 03 July 2015

The title adds a touch of currency to the poem, what used to be taken as a pen-portrait has become selfie, being the android term. Strong and meaningful rhymes, and a well-knit composition...After reading this, the expression comes from the heart is Nice to meet you, Yasmeen. Good job! :)

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Yasmin Khan 04 July 2015

Thanks dear Shahzia, for nice words.

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Jaishree Nair 02 July 2015

A selfie of the inner self.A vivid image captured in print. Thanks for sharing

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In this poem your inner self spoke more loudly than your outer self Yasmeen. Beautifully done. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Yasmin Khan 02 July 2015

Thank you for taking time to read my poe..

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Your inner self spoke more loudly than your outer self Yasmeen. Beautifully done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 July 2015

A peep into myself deeply! With the muse of life and love. Nice work.

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Yasmin Khan 02 July 2015

Thank you kindly

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