Thursday, November 8, 2007

My Secret Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you look at me you see average
Look into my eyes,
You see nothing wrong.
If you could look deep inside you'd see the real me
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Ashley Stone
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**aShLeY~NiiChOl<3** 1013 18 August 2009

oh-em-gee! the poem - great! the event - i am so sorry. but i can relate - in a different way. dealing with secret pain is hard. but i rated 10! good job.

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I love it! I'm sorry that this happened to you, but I can totally relate. I keep my pain secret for a different reason, but I still understand how hard it is to suffer alone. I'm glad that you got to get it out in this poem. Great work!

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Subbaraman N V 31 January 2008

Yes, only the person who wears the shoes knows where it pinches! God bless you!

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Jemarie Ragudo 08 November 2007

The eyes, they say, are the windows of the soul. And it is only when we look at the eyes of a person that we understand the workings of his soul. Great poem!

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