Walking around a familiar path
I hoped and wondered if I would be
Let in to my secret garden today
Will a gateway open, for just a moment!
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This write brings scenes from the film to my mind...excellent write Anita...10+++
It's a shame we all must leave our perfect gardens Anita.. beautiful write..10
The Secret Garden was one of my favorite books as a child and your poem takes me back to that wild and overgrown garden with its incredible potential for shaping into order. I suspect your secret garden is a metaphor for something more ephemeral though - a state of mind where wonder flits and love explores. Your final stanza in particular, is superb. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥