Monday, June 1, 2009

My Secret Garden Comments

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Walking around a familiar path
I hoped and wondered if I would be
Let in to my secret garden today
Will a gateway open, for just a moment!
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Anita Atina
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Alison Cassidy 07 June 2009

The Secret Garden was one of my favorite books as a child and your poem takes me back to that wild and overgrown garden with its incredible potential for shaping into order. I suspect your secret garden is a metaphor for something more ephemeral though - a state of mind where wonder flits and love explores. Your final stanza in particular, is superb. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Fiona Davidson 05 June 2009

This write brings scenes from the film to my mind...excellent write Anita...10+++

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LOVEFOOL Aka 03 June 2009

In this write you capture the wonders of childhood 10+++

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 June 2009

It's a shame we all must leave our perfect gardens Anita.. beautiful write..10

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