Tuesday, April 7, 2009

My Secret Garden Comments

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I dream of a secret garden
Filled with roses
And a bench that seats two
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John McClay
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Paige S 08 April 2009

Very nice. It is sad that the world in which we live cannot be the same as that which we dream of.

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Ben Gieske 07 April 2009

Wonderful poem, but the ending was a sad surprise. Keeping dreaming and hoping.

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John McClay

John McClay

NewPort Beach, California
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