Thursday, October 9, 2008

My Secret Desire Comments

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give me the sword that cuts and breaks
I'll plunge it into those i love but still hate.
put on your pretty dresses, frills and bows
I'll be with you as from this world you go.
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Marieta Maglas 09 July 2010

abstract lines that invite the reader to deep thought..very well composed poem....

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Katii Stacy 12 October 2008

I love this poem, your rhyme is amazing and i'm just marvled at your ability to write...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 October 2008

Read your secret desire. It is a different type of composition on love. Teenage emotion is there.

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