Thursday, August 14, 2008

My Secret Comments

Rating: 4.3

I start to scream and cry
Such a fool willing to die
Why this life is full of lie
It’s a nightmare I can't deny
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Jhane Reyes
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Maricel Martinez 25 August 2008

hi cousin dear ur poem is full of secret, mind to tell me what's this...nice poem! thanks MM

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 August 2008

The reading of this piece was really difficult. That was because the writing did not have the ability to flow from one word to another. It was completely disorganized. The writer could do much better with much more time. GW62

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Ency Bearis 16 August 2008

a nice write again..i know it is a secret..but you did it well a secret...lovely.. Ency Bearis

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