Thursday, June 26, 2008

My Sea, My Sea Comments

Rating: 3.5

It was from seas of west
that blew the waves
from its mighty chest
blown over sandy graves.
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Andrew Lockley
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Brian Jani 15 May 2014

Andrew What a fantastic poem

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Quite inspiring. I see the Irish Sea, passionate tempest-like and potently over looming any passer-by of the shore.

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 June 2008

This is very vague as to meaning. Particularly, as it relates to the title of this stanza. Waves are the dominant feature here. I had to give it my vagueness mark of 6. GW62

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sara }i{ 26 June 2008

nice work Andrew you hav a deep feelings and you show it, i love it :)

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