Friday, June 20, 2008

My Sea And Sky Comments

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My sea of dreams, a vast expanse of glittering dreams and wishes rocking back and forth to form the waves
This sea the only sea I know that changes its color even from a deep majestic purple to a light azure
It changes from the most profound yellow to a bright grassy green
Atop the horizon of this picture perfect sight, the great sky towers above everything
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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 July 2008

your poems flow so fluent, sometimes stopping at eddies of profound thrlls. Each poem is a magic.

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Edwin Empestan (alba) 21 June 2008

It is wonderful to read your poems and I really enjoy your poems particularly the 'My Sea and Sky'. Very well and excellently expressed. Well penned indeed. I hope you can continue to write more poems and I will wait for them and enthusiastically read and perhaps make a comment on how I feel after reading your poems. Congratulations and more power to you. You can also read my poems and I would also welcome for your comments. Best regards, God bless and more power! Edwin A. Empestan

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