Thursday, September 27, 2018

My Scrappy Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never believed in love at first sight,
This girl in her eyes there was such bright light
The words spoken between us were so very few,
How could she feel so close to me I haven't a clue,
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Sun Flower
COMMENTS
C F 26 March 2019

A very romantic write, love came in too late and you will just have to eat your heart. Goodluck in trying to forget her.

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Naila Rais 24 December 2018

Really wonderful! ! You may like to read my poem the fragrance.......10 Hope many more will flow.. Charming to read and liked its story flow.... Naila

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 October 2018

This girl is so beautiful, her Spirit reached down into my soul I believe she was sent by God to make me whole This girl is an angel, at least that's what I see, When I hear her voice it's sounds like heaven to me.....love is a mystery....... attraction, infatuation..... mysterious ways. well depicted. thank u dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 October 2018

Beautiful start, Sun Flower. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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