My Schoolbag Comments

thanks for sharing your work with us, wish you every success...10/10

(cont.) You had a fine attitude towards school, teachers, and classmates. To MyPoemList. Bri :) p.s. the ‘rules’ I learned in school, re capitalization and punctuation when writing prose, are NOT followed in your poem. Again you have leeway in these areas I believe due to “Poetic License”.

(cont.) Instead of “…my whole teachers” and “..my whole classmates”, I would use: “…all of my teachers” OR “..the whole teaching staff” AND “..my whole class” OR “…all of my classmates”. I’m pretty/very sure your bag didn’t mean “everything” to you, literally, but for what it was, what it carried, and what it represented to you, it MEANT A GREAT DEAL to you! (cont.)

(cont.) Yes, “careless”, here, seems to imply that they “care less” than you do/did. Not all people think alike! ! (cont.)

(cont.) To me, “pretty” implies attractive, something not all will agree upon [one student may find one bag attractive, and another student won’t]. but ….aren’t bags generally judged more on their usefulness and physical properties, NOT including attractiveness? Hmm? I would use “stuff”, not “stuffs”; I don’t think I’ve ever heard “stuffs” as a noun, but as a verb, yes! (cont.)

I’m not sure of the appropriateness of using “attributed” as you have; I’m really not sure, but ‘we poets’ CAN use ‘poetic license’! attribute: verb “1. regard something as being caused by (someone or something) .” (cont.)

School days were great days for me, as well!

You remind me of one of many thing: my finely woven schoolbag and yellow saddles when i was a kindergarten pupil. I respect.

nice and so much fun to read......enjoyed this very much.... please read my poems and leave your opinion

a nice write about your school bag I enjoyed those days. Sometimes I wish I could go back and redo that time in my life. I would even take more interest in my studies. I always wanted high grades and would not settle for less. enjoyed your thoughts

Certain things have close associations with our life. So whenever we see them they evoke memories in us! Your school bag is a reminder of your beautiful school days! So you treasure it!