My Scattered Thoughts Xii Comments

May I repeat, you are at your creative best in your Scattered Thoughts! In between the lines I can read the existential angst of the poet, see the redness of blood that oozes out of her heart, her sense of relief at watching the beautiful objects and little lives in Nature and her attempt to explicate the allegory of life! You come finally to the assumption that a journey into the unknown from the nests built in concrete is not quite fearsome... A great write Shahzia and a 10

A fatigued poet in the solace of nature's bounty has once more expressed here thoughts immaculate.

If one reads in between the lines, through your poetic weaving, you have rendered the philosophy of life starting with first three outstanding lines. Getting redeemed by nature's blessings infusing the vigorous approach towards. facing the upheavals and understanding of life taking a leaf out of migratory birds, lamenting the caged life all thoughts have been eloquently and beautifully written. One of your outstanding poems.10/10

What lovely write, Shahzia...if we could read between lines, and see what is unseen.. how much more beautiful life would be..thanks for sharing your thoughts..

I agree with your thoughts shazia aapi, you are an inspiration to our community and to me as well, I respect you, you are my elder, someone has given you 1 for this poem, let me give you 10.

Let there be flood in your ink for ever to irrigate the barren heart.

some beautiful lines in this poem, , , , a poem with deep emotions, , , ,

It; s so thoughtful and thought-provoking that I read it again and again. I found many quotable lines: 'Strange facts turn life into a daily allegory encoded into a derwesh’s dance in a trance, ''......''God! help me read between the lines the text you have masterly displayed...'', wisdom speaks eloquently!

Shazia - you really had opened your mind and flooded it with your ink.... a thoughtful write