Thursday, June 27, 2013

My Scattered Thoughts Viii Comments

Rating: 4.4

My shadow always stays with me
I never walk alone,
I have a bit of life in me
who says that i am stone?
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Shahzia Batool
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Passionate Reader 05 July 2013

You play with words and make a pleasant harmony! ! ! The start just holds my whole attention and I enjoyed till the end. My shadow always stays with me I never walk alone, Truly an intriguing write! ! ! Well done :)

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Vera Sidhwa 02 July 2013

Your scattered thought are God imbued, and philosophical in nature. And God will let you know when your thoughts will be express, and when kept in virgin mind. Beautiful poem.

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Valerie Dohren 01 July 2013

Our shadow is always with us, either the shadow within or the manifested shadow. Great write Shahzia.

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Dave Walker 01 July 2013

A really wonderful poem, well written.

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Tribhawan Kaul 01 July 2013

Anotther penning of beautiful thoughts regarding self introspection and yes, no one is alone in this world. His/her dreams/ thoughts/shadows never leave one alone.. Lovely poem.

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Danny Draper 30 June 2013

Scattered thoughts captured here as are many poems the captured elements of scatterd thoughts, nice write.

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Dinesan Madathil 30 June 2013

Your scattered thoughts bear witness to your proximity to all and the luxury of solitude proclaimed is an impossibility for you with 100 poems being bloomed out of your groves of philosophy, erudition and imagination. Wonderful write, Shahzia,

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Wahab Abdul 29 June 2013

and congratulation for completing 100 poems, this must me a special feeling for a poet and also congratulation for being on top on popular list of living poets on this site....

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Wahab Abdul 29 June 2013

nice thought and talking with alter ego is wonderful.. my shadow is also walking with me..

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 June 2013

Nice to keep developing scattered thoughts, which reflect the mind better than concentrated thoughts. Faithful shadow keeps company. Nice start and end.

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Yasmin Khan 29 June 2013

You true feeling are described here. A sensitive person always experience this even when a poem is not being composed, thoughts move along scattered and at times composed into poems.

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R.j. Wynn 28 June 2013

You are the chosen one.

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David Wood 28 June 2013

I always try and channel my thoughts before setting down to write and keep my thoughts loose. But poetry is that bitter sweet pill that takes over our thoughts. Often I have the first line then as I write I let the poem take over. A lovely write Shahzia.

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Farah Ilyas 28 June 2013

Congrats Ma'am u have completed ur 100 poems...keep on sharing such wonders among us.. Congratulation

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Valsa George 28 June 2013

while musing over lost time or writing rhymes, I do not feel the time flying That's exactly what we all feel! No wonder, we spend a lot of our time in poemhunter, musing our thoughts away! As the other poems of this series, a powerful write! !

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Ramesh Rai 27 June 2013

no one is alone. always carrying shadow n thoughts.this poem radiate the inner feelings certainly a poet who always prefers solitary

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