Saturday, August 3, 2013

My Scattered Thoughts Ix Comments

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We could neither live nor die together
now we are neither alive nor dead
we could not cross the bounds of ceremonies
still the dear ties did not end
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Shahzia Batool
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Heather Wilkins 06 August 2013

many scatter thoughts about life. good write

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Dinesan Madathil 04 August 2013

Again the spilt beans of thoughts dear.... The poem is a compliment to your readers Ms Shahzia..

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 August 2013

Never letting others read the book of life Yet scattered thoughts open a window into that book. Beautiful poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 August 2013

Wonderful write...loved your scattered thoughts...Lovely poem... Thank you Shahzia for the beautiful comments on my 100 th poem...Thank a lot..

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Wahab Abdul 03 August 2013

somany things in a single piece of poetry, wonderful, love it, love it......

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David Wood 03 August 2013

The recollections of our thoughts during the day are an internal analysis of our aspirations for due diligence. A god write.

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Ramesh Rai 03 August 2013

beautiful write. loved your scattered thoughts. be blessed with divine thoughts.

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Khairul Ahsan 03 August 2013

Yes, really scattered! Nice to read.

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