We could neither live nor die together
now we are neither alive nor dead
we could not cross the bounds of ceremonies
still the dear ties did not end
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Again the spilt beans of thoughts dear.... The poem is a compliment to your readers Ms Shahzia..
Never letting others read the book of life Yet scattered thoughts open a window into that book. Beautiful poem.
Wonderful write...loved your scattered thoughts...Lovely poem... Thank you Shahzia for the beautiful comments on my 100 th poem...Thank a lot..
somany things in a single piece of poetry, wonderful, love it, love it......
The recollections of our thoughts during the day are an internal analysis of our aspirations for due diligence. A god write.
beautiful write. loved your scattered thoughts. be blessed with divine thoughts.
many scatter thoughts about life. good write