My Scattered Thoughts Iv Comments

aapi, if i can aproach, Everything is not impossible, means every bad thing is possible! ... We are human. I think is not it good! ... And in ideal life (if it matters in real life, not just in the books or Books) , conditions are bad when we are moving on the bad side and He is not happy from us. ... A human should always be good with others. (should always be good with himself too. p.a.i.n.f.u.l. but not always) . best wishes. and nice poem.

How cute the world of dreams are, unless you open your eyes my sentiments as when the world is just to hard to take I hide within my dreams.......

A very beautiful poem. Last stanza is inspirational and gives hope even though one feels detached to the journey of life taking its own course. :)

It is a beautifully written poem. Last stanza is inspirational and gives hope even though one feels detached with the life's journey taking its own course.

Lovely- Inspirational poem! ! ! ! ! . Nothing is impossible in this world- dear Shazia- - one just requires grit and determination. Great write. Keep writing- enjoyed it.

carrying the loads of unfulfilled aspirations, Every aspiration unfulfilled is quite a burden. May we strive to accomplish each of our heart's assignments, that we leave none of our dreams unfulfilled. Wonderful Shahzia.

It is no time to get home yet. Only those people dies who cannot learn anymore, who want TOO much, definitely do not get it. We get what gives us a lesson. We are here on this earth to learn, learn and learn, put it into God's computer for reason only He knows. When you submit yourself for the will of God, love everybody, I mean Everybody, have kindness to all human or anything else, find gratefullness for what you have, that is the time you shall live in true happiness here and now. One man or woman cannot be god and do what we want, when we do not even know the whole story, we do not even know who we are.

Lovely write! ! ! i loved it your question, is there any impossible in this world? yes it is impossible itself_Soul

The journey of life and u pennd a wondrful poem throughout so nice to read. Thanx 4 yor coments too. I so luv readin u.

You always dare to dream and I believe our visions and dreams are spurs that help us to live a life to its fullest. 'Time is but a flowing stream' and you swim on it's waters with hopes, desires and dream. well written!

Time is but a flowing stream - beautiful line, a lovely thought-provoking write Shahzia.

A pleasant read with deep undertones. Are we moving through time or does time move with us, or is this moment our only continuum.

nothing is impossible for a soul embarked on a sincere search within...

My scattered 111 and iv both a perfect 10, maybe 2 many readers on to allow me to rate. Cheers

What beautiful words. Absolutely thoughtful thinking. Thank You

nothing is impossible in the world, if we have the desire...inspirational..

very true and insightful poem: -)

Brave, insightful thinking artistically expressed. Excellent, Shahzia!

Thats was realistic! ! And what a beautiful way too connect it with the mother nature

We all carry the 'load of unfulfilled aspirations' but the aspirations and dreams are the very essence of our being.