Friday, January 16, 2009

My Scars Comments

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My scars are like entries in my diary,
you could tell how mad I was by looking at the deepened scars,
you could tell how many times i've hurt,
you could feel my pain, you could touch my past,
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Monique Ornelas
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Sameer Ahmed 22 January 2009

A nice poem with a depiction of your pain...........You have used simple but meaningful words......The simli of scars indeed reflect the agony and pain but one has to look otherway around and try to minimise the ugliness of scars by opening new gates of happiness.........I enjoyed it though..........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Elena Winters 17 January 2009

we all go through pain but understand you can't control everything that goes on...........sometimes you can.......but its up to you to heal yourself very interesting overall this was an amazing poem 10

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I have many scars too so i feel you're pain this is a good poem KRISTA

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Monique Ornelas

Monique Ornelas

Bakersfield, California
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