Saturday, April 25, 2009

My Savior, My Mentor, My Light Comments

Rating: 3.3

To be betrayed
Would never feel nice
It feels like the deceit you feel
Is like a fall on you by that heavy slab of ice
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Alen Alexander
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 June 2010

Some people who don't really understand what is like to be saved would compromise to write poems like this... you are not one of them and i appreciate that... continue excellent writings dear sir...

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Obinna Eruchie 11 September 2009

Looking up to The Lord for deliverance from despair. Touching.

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Indira Renganathan 26 August 2009

Experiences count a lot in life....and faith in God is the most helpful...nive words opening up with your hurt heart....God bless

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DaNa XxX 11 June 2009

i gave this poem ~10**********10~.....well done! ^_^

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Toni Bellanger 02 June 2009

You describe your feelings well, and your faith is inspiring.

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