Sunday, August 16, 2009

My Savior Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cannot forget
The love we shared when we met
Darkness filled my soul. My heart could not be healed
Before I found you, my feelings where concealed
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Justin Greene
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The Understander 10 September 2009

wow this is amazing. Great poetry

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Marieta Maglas 08 September 2009

''Death will try to separate us It is fate, so put on your black dress Heaven has begun to call As we wait, my heart begins to fall As the moon rises, you die in my hands As I weep, you head towards the promise lands'' nice sad symbolistic poem, thank you for sharing.........10+++++

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