Friday, December 18, 2015

My Salute To A Casual Naught Comments

Rating: 5.0

My salute to a twisting tasty thought,
three cheers to a nature's nimble naught,
that melts a finely frozen heart,
and blank life when turns in an art,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Hazel Durham 20 December 2015

Stunning imagery with great rhyming and flow, to never stop believing in love is to stay young and free! Wow! Outstanding write!

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Nosheen Irfan 19 December 2015

Twisting tasty thought, nature's nimble naught...The alliteration throughout this poem is simply amazing. A very deep reflection on life. Pure delight to read it. Perfect rhyme.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 December 2015

Wow, very amazing definitely this poem is. see on the canvas a green scenery, colors appear in a gray greenery and give nice thrill in this wise imagery. Mind blowing composition shared you feel....10

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