Friday, August 5, 2022

My Sadness Comments

Rating: 5.0

A curtain hangs before my face
Through this I can't see the world with
Its bright colors
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 06 August 2022

Certainly sadess is a curtain the poet trying to remove.Nice metaphor.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 August 2022

Sadness is beautifully defined here. Although it's very difficult to capture this feeling but you have done it with effortless ease. Kudos!

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